Hebrew short story

In Hebrew class we had to write a little story about a picture! Here is mine:

 

היום אני אוֹפה עם האמא שלי. ציפּתי לזה כל השבוּע! אנחנוּ אוֹפוֹת פַּאִי תפּוּחים. לבשתי את הסינר הורוֹד שלי ואני מוכנה לאפייה! האמה שלי גם לבשה את הסינר שלה אבל שלה לבן. אנחנוּ הוֹספנוּ שתי ביצים, כוֹס קמח אחת, שתי כוסות תפוחים, וכּפית אבקת אפיה. זה נראה טעים מאוֹד! אנחנוּ הכנסנו לתבנית ושמנו בתנור. בזמן שחכּיתי,  אני רקדתי עם האמא שלי. 

The Best Vacation

In this assignment we had to draw a picture of our ultimate vacation and write about it using sensory language. Sensory language means incorporating the 5 senses in your writing which is key because it immerses the reader into the scene, experience, and/or scenario! I really like this project because I learned more about this subject and never before thought to include sensory language. Although if I could do this whole assignment again I would try to use higher level vocabulary and go into more detail.

Now here is the little poem I wrote and the picture I drew:

The sand and water splashing on my feet, the wind blowing through my hair, my surfboard in my hand, laughing with my family. The best feelings in the world. 

 

I can see the birds flying around and catch a glimpse of two purple birds. I hollered in surprise but my family didn’t believe me since the birds were flying past so rapidly. I can also see lots of fog covering the high, green mountains in the distance. The best sights in the world.

 

Everything sounded silent while I was underwater except the bubbles from the fish and my flutter kicking. The second I put my head over the water it felt deafening. The best (and worst) sounds in the world.  

 

After the fun few hours of surfing and playing in the water we walked to a lunch place very close to the beach. On the walk I could smell the salty water and the beautiful flowers that appear all over Hawaii. The best smells in the world.

 

Once we got to the restaurant I had some of my favourite foods and I shared everything with the people around me. I could still taste the salty water that I accidentally swallowed before though. The best taste in the world.